Project 1: Paragraph Revision Final Draft

Directions:

Revisit your paragraph as a whole: Revise to follow PIE guidelines.

Here is an example of PIE Formed Paragraph.

When faced with hardship, people can use the strength of others to make it through a difficult period of time. Joyce Butler from Listening Is an Act of Love used the driving force of her children to help her endure long and hard work hours (67). Joyce’s undying love for her children became her motivation to make it through a challenging time in her life. The motivation of her children helped Joyce stay driven and committed to her labor intensive job. Looking to others for support and motivation can help people deal with hard times in their lives.

Connect all the parts of the revised portion of your PIE paragraph together and place your revised paragraph here: